lookie lookie

[sarah_orange]

I made a little e-flyer with artwork that Ged supplied.



does it seem ok? canst thou read it? does it have the correct amount of info? is it way too big (for the dial-up users amongst you... ;-p)?

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EDIT: updated image - any improvement?

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_pyromancer_/]

That's beautiful!

Only comment I'd add is to put something like "(Open during regular Black Sheep clubnight, Free Entry!") after the Sunday one (poss in much smaller writing). Just so anyone who's wondering doesn't assume that either Black Sheep isn't on that night or that they might have to pay to get to the GothSwap.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_pyromancer_/]

And perhaps also add "(During Pubculture, Free Entry!)" under the Saturday one too.

[viciouscabaret.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I was going to suggest slipping in a plug for Black Sheep (and why not, eh?!)

"Free Entry" might be worth mentioning, as it's not implicit.

And maybe a link to further details (ie how it works)... no offence to the artwork creators (the picture is beautiful) but I rather assumed that the link was to more info about the Swap thing itself - as a plug for the artist the size of the name (and website) is a little excessive!

[tails-redux.livejournal.com]

All this mention of 'slipping in' and 'free entry' makes me think that Black Sheep are taking a novel marketing approach by making butt plugs.

beware of dueling banjos

[viciouscabaret.livejournal.com]

reading it back it sounds more like a warning... "suggest slipping in a plug for Black Sheep"

[sarah-orange.livejournal.com]

I increased the size as I decreased the picture size and didn't want them to become un-readable - point taken though!