lookie lookie

[sarah_orange]

I made a little e-flyer with artwork that Ged supplied.



does it seem ok? canst thou read it? does it have the correct amount of info? is it way too big (for the dial-up users amongst you... ;-p)?

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EDIT: updated image - any improvement?

Comments

[viciouscabaret.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I was going to suggest slipping in a plug for Black Sheep (and why not, eh?!)

"Free Entry" might be worth mentioning, as it's not implicit.

And maybe a link to further details (ie how it works)... no offence to the artwork creators (the picture is beautiful) but I rather assumed that the link was to more info about the Swap thing itself - as a plug for the artist the size of the name (and website) is a little excessive!

[tails-redux.livejournal.com]

All this mention of 'slipping in' and 'free entry' makes me think that Black Sheep are taking a novel marketing approach by making butt plugs.

beware of dueling banjos

[viciouscabaret.livejournal.com]

reading it back it sounds more like a warning... "suggest slipping in a plug for Black Sheep"

[sarah-orange.livejournal.com]

I increased the size as I decreased the picture size and didn't want them to become un-readable - point taken though!